tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post9041674478844214624..comments2024-02-13T13:54:25.645+01:00Comments on Finding Clarity: Visual Dare 8 - ListeningMiranda Katehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-24596789959204534922013-02-27T06:00:49.028+01:002013-02-27T06:00:49.028+01:00GREAT hook. I would definitely keep reading if thi...GREAT hook. I would definitely keep reading if this were a novel opening. Just enough familiarity for a reader to follow the pacing, and more than enough mystery to keep the reader turning pages. Been allowed farther than before....from what? LOVE THIS.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05145626477713347271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-11422448175527822392013-02-26T13:05:47.922+01:002013-02-26T13:05:47.922+01:00This is wonderful. Exactly how to grab a reader in...This is wonderful. Exactly how to grab a reader in four paragraphs. I'm always striving (and failing) to do that. Nice work.Wombathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18398485548046610750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-62757486411477200142013-02-26T09:17:35.650+01:002013-02-26T09:17:35.650+01:00You know I am not quite sure what they were gonna ...You know I am not quite sure what they were gonna be! LOL But for me the inspiration was the Matrix 2, when he is at the train station. Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-47364889221126987772013-02-26T01:48:26.303+01:002013-02-26T01:48:26.303+01:00Very descriptive language. Works very well and ver...Very descriptive language. Works very well and very visually with the prompt. How come I find myself going, "Run from the German Shepards, cat!"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com