Once again I checked out the prompt line for last weeks Thursday Threads flash fiction contest, hosted by Siobhan Muir, and I saw the story immediately. And again, I also managed to snag another Honourable Mention!
I went very dark with this, but it's what spoke to me. Enjoy!
Hope
Hope stood back to check his work, but felt there was still something
missing. He stepped forward again and started moving them about, trying
to form some kind of symmetry, or pattern that made sense outside his
head.
It was tough going and
he had broken out in a sweat. He pulled his jumper off and continued,
not caring for once about his nudity, not here in the basement. The
single unshielded bulb illuminated everything in a flat, stark light,
but it also cast deep shadows across his chest and stomach. This pleased
him. He didn’t want to see the scars from all those years ago.
As
he moved a limb here, and a torso there, Hope realised he was almost
done - a few more hooks, and they’d be done hanging; although he’d
take a couple of photos first, just for his own records. Then he’d take
them down and think about putting together the next piece. It wasn’t
going to be easy. He’d gone through all of those who’d mocked him
through school, now he needed to find work colleagues. He’d teach them
what hope really meant, especially when it was taken away.
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