tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post5715715463994318105..comments2024-02-13T13:54:25.645+01:00Comments on Finding Clarity: Visual Dare 6 - EmergeMiranda Katehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-67368616748476522962013-02-13T09:17:07.164+01:002013-02-13T09:17:07.164+01:00Interesting I have never read it like that - or lo...Interesting I have never read it like that - or looked it like that - them rushing forward screaming no, in my head, meant that it was a bad idea her coming through. And the alone in the house - where had everyone gone? They were on the other side....but could they get back? Always interesting to see how it reads. Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-79585025665242500372013-02-13T02:42:26.159+01:002013-02-13T02:42:26.159+01:00Great work! I love Belinda's childlike curiosi...Great work! I love Belinda's childlike curiosity, and the fact that the others are terrified of her, not the other way around. Makes me wonder if the people are somehow not quite human....or perhaps, if Belinda is not all that she seems. Also, her being alone in the house for so long seems rather sinister in and of itself. Great suspense!!Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05145626477713347271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-14677419224506997872013-02-13T02:31:50.099+01:002013-02-13T02:31:50.099+01:00The first line was spectacular.The first line was spectacular.drmagoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15775058162003058562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-35740338748419779882013-02-12T20:52:06.492+01:002013-02-12T20:52:06.492+01:00Thanks all, glad you liked it. Thanks all, glad you liked it. Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-41046373553395327842013-02-11T12:48:39.777+01:002013-02-11T12:48:39.777+01:00love the fact she checks to see if anyone is watch...love the fact she checks to see if anyone is watching even though she knows she's alone - sort of thing I would do!<br />Always wondered what's on the other side of the mirror... just checking out a few other stories before I post my own!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07953334708365738152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-84181693943158675402013-02-11T00:08:27.887+01:002013-02-11T00:08:27.887+01:00Terrific story telling!Terrific story telling!Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-86417167358987768952013-02-07T16:10:07.385+01:002013-02-07T16:10:07.385+01:00Loved this idea, who wouldn't head through to ...Loved this idea, who wouldn't head through to the unknown given a chance, great imagery :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320131690292314651.post-85339987619135154212013-02-07T14:22:22.641+01:002013-02-07T14:22:22.641+01:00Oooh, I wonder what terrified them? I loved your d...Oooh, I wonder what terrified them? I loved your description of her face going through the void Miranda!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.com