This week's picture prompt was created by Polish artist: Zdzislaw Beksinski. Unfortunately he was murdered during a robbery at his flat in 2005. (though he would be 94 if he was still alive). He has a lot of interesting art.
This week's is short and dystopian.
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This is what it had
come to; the only way to communicate. I shivered in the cold night air. Despite
the fire in front of me, I was too high up to feel its warmth, but this was my
life now. This was how information was sent from place to place, and without me
up here on the top of this pinnacle, there would be a break in the chain.
I’m not sure which I hated more, the climb
up or the climb down. Either way it took far too long and I was so terrified I
would lose my grip and then my life, just like Tomo did.
He’d been on the pinnacle to my left, and
was clearly tired after the nightshift. Just four steps down and he’d slipped,
fallen a few rungs, and then caught one. But I couldn’t work out whether he’d
broken his arm during the short fall, or just couldn’t catch a proper grip on
the rung, sometimes the cold weather up here covered them in frost. Either way
he’d eventually given up and let go.
I’d called encouragement, but I’d been
powerless to do anything else. And I’d cried off and on through the rest of my
shift. I’d never climbed down as carefully as I had that morning. It had shaken
me up badly.
But they said our work was vital work,
despite the risks. We kept the world running. Smoke and fire signals were my
life. I wasn’t trained to do anything else.
Everyone was shunted into specific
professions to help humanity now. There were no choices anymore. I’d read the
history and what had got us here, how people had been able to do whatever they
wanted, with all this magical technology, but never actually realised it. And
it had resulted in this; the wasteland we now lived in.
One thing being up here was good for, was
reading – interspersed between my five minute fire check. I read about those
days and daydreamed about what it must have been like to have things like trees
and grass and animals. Where there had been vistas and not just rock and
desert, and where there were all kinds of food. I couldn’t imagine what it must
have tasted like; food was functional now, just the basics we needed to survive.
Oh for a time machine to go back to it, and
be a part of it, and not stuck up here on the roof of the world, watching fires
burn. But then I was lucky. I didn’t have to scavenge on the ground. I got to
see the sky; I had my own vista, even if it was a deadly one.
The beasts had taken the land. We who survived only did so because we were able to climb the the First Ones stones. Tall waterless stone columns where our ancestors had hidden from invaders in the first days.
ReplyDeleteHoly places that only the priests and foolish children ever visited.
We knew by the stories that they were refuge, safe from outsiders, safe from the beasts.
What we didn't know was our ancestors carried food and drink.
Excellent, love it. Thanks for joining.
DeleteAwesome story Miranda, very dystopian! My offering is on the lovecraftian edge this week. a href="https://lexikon.home.blog/2023/10/12/then-there-were-two-midweekflash-challenge-story/">Then There Were two
ReplyDeleteThe edge of something a lot bigger. So much story packed into it. Great stuff.
DeleteHere's a clickable link for readers: Then There Were Two
I don't even want to know where this story came from. The game show from hell.
ReplyDeleteThe Game Show From Hell
Love this, great concept. I wonder what he would feel at day 23?
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