Despite hours trawling search engines, I can not find the person who took this photo - the key site that it seems to link to is currently 'under construction'. But it appears on thousands of pinterest boards, so I was able to find out where it was:
The Chateau de Singes (Castle of Monkeys) is really the Château à Cahaignes (Castle Cahaignes), located in Cahaignes, Eure, Upper Normandy, France. Abandoned in 1976.
This is how it inspired me. I hope it inspires you too.
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Threshold
She could
see the cracks of light falling on the floor, so knew that stepping through the
door would not lead her into darkness. And she could even see more doors in the
distance so she knew it wasn’t a trap, so what held her on the threshold?
It could only
be fear – but fear of what? Fear that it would not take her anywhere; that the
time and effort to go through and find out it was a dead-end would take too
much from her. She had been through so many doors like this, with the light
shining in, only to find that they were empty, devoid of the life and
connection she sought. She wasn’t sure she could deal with the overwhelming
disappointment again.
But
standing her on the threshold was no solution; she gained nothing standing here
– she knew that. You gained nothing without risk. Sometimes you had to take a
leap and hope for the best, and try and not anticipate what might come; try and
embrace the moment and have no expectation.
She heard
the creak of another door in the distance. She heard the chatter of voices.
Her heart
yearned to be a part of them, to join in and feel alive again, feel a part of
something. She had been trapped in this place for so long, she could only
fantasise what it might be like.
Her toes
tingled as the voices drew nearer. Shadows moved further ahead in the corridor
she was looking into. They would come round the corner at any moment. They
would face her and she would see them. If she could just step forward she could
greet them, she could walk with them and hear their conversation properly and
not just snippets. But she could not compel herself to do so.
“... just a
simple mark on her skin ... hidden away ... fear of reprisal ...”
The voices
grew louder
“... broke
in ... caught ... there was an uprising ...”
They would
be here any second.
“So they
killed her for a simple birthmark?”
“Yes, and
they say her ghost still haunts this ruined mansion.”
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ReplyDeleteFantastic entry. Here's a clickable link: Slivers Of Sun
DeleteOkay, here's my entry: http://www.theworldofkrsmith.com/2017/04/mid-week-flash-challenge-week-6.html
ReplyDeleteIt's called The Comforts of Home.
Great little tale. Thanks for joining.
DeleteHere's a clickable link for those wishing to read: The Comforts of Home
Miranda, you snagged me again. :D So thank you. I'm really glad you decided to start up a flash prompt. Here is my little entry, though not quite as exotic as last week. Still, we do what we can.
ReplyDeletehttp://stacybennettauthor.com/2017/04/16/the-waiting-house-midweek-flash/
Wonderful vivid tale. Thanks for entering.
DeleteHere's a clickable link for others wanting to read: The Waiting House
Don't ask me to explain where the ideas come from. I don't have a clue...
ReplyDeletehttps://mysoulstears.wordpress.com/2017/04/16/miranda-kates-mid-week-challenge-20170416/
A compelling and emotive read. Love it Mark. Thanks for joining.
DeleteHere's a clickable link for others to be able to read it: My Soul's Tears
OK, here's mine - "All My Friends Are Dead". Now to read everyoine else's.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely, unique piece. Love it.
DeleteAnd thanks for joining and making this my most entered challenge so far.
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful. Your prose is amazingly evocative.
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