It's proving quite hard to get into, as the way is not yet clear, but it's coming. Plus my writing time has been scuppered by work demands, so I have had less time to focus, and have fallen way behind with my NaNoWriMo word count.
But here's a piece to entice you:
As the van
jolted forward with the light change, her mind jolted back to their first night
in their new home together. They had decided to not move into either one of
their existing homes, but to do this properly and move into a new place they
had chosen together; a nice three bed semi.
They had settled
in well, and found an easy rhythm. They created date nights and nights in
together. Their first holiday abroad had been thrilling, both enjoying the same
type of beach holidays; part lazing on the beach; part discovering the history
of the Greek island they had picked. It had worked, they were in synch. So it
had only been a matter of time until the next step.
It had been a
long time since she had recalled any of the soft, gentler feelings she’d had
towards him. She hadn’t dared; it hurt too much. And she’d been too consumed
with rage. Now the rage was gone - she had quelled it.
Lizzy felt the van
start to slow down, and saw the steps of the court house ahead through the
windscreen. She saw all the people gathered there and wondered what they were
there for. As the van pulled up she could hear the noise of them; their rage.
The guard raised
his eyebrows at her and held up a blanket. She looked at him stone faced and
then at the blanket. If nothing else it would protect her from the spit.
She stood up and
lowered her head, and he swept it round her as the back doors opened. He
clutched her shoulders helping her out, knowing she couldn’t step far with the
ankle cuffs.
The roar
increased as she stepped out, the blanket blocking her view of them. She felt
relief from that, but knew the shuffle up the steps was going to be one of
humiliation.
It was like
walking through a lightening storm as the flashes went off left and right,
streaking through the material of the blanket, heating up her face. When she
reached the court house entrance she sensed a gathering of people behind her,
and heard the warning voices of police telling people to keep their distance.
Then the silence of the marble interior of the foyer deafened her as the doors
were closed. Someone pulled the blanket off her head, leaving it to rest on her
shoulders, and she saw her team of lawyers standing there waiting for her.
Everything was hushed in here, and she was manoeuvred into one of the side
rooms for the briefing.
Entice me you did. Just enough to get me interested and I want to know if she killed him, or if she's in court for something much worse. Lovely build up and I get the feeling she's a bit unhinged too, which makes me what to read much more :)
ReplyDeleteWeeelllll, the prologue actually tells the reader what happened, but now I am thinking that that might not be a good idea, that leading them through this and keeping them guessing might work better. She sort of is unhinged, but I am hoping that readers will sympathise by the end! We'll see how it pans out. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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