No-one in the street knew who called them, but the Risley’s
were suspected. They’d all known things weren’t right; the mother had been seen
sporting black-eyes often enough. But it wasn’t done to wash your dirty linen
in public, not in this street, in this tiny corner of elite suburbia. Although that
night everyone had heard the screams.
Before then the children hadn’t been considered. They were
seen playing, sometimes with others, and they’d seemed okay - a bit skinny
maybe, a little withdrawn, but nothing to cause concern, no sign they’d been
affected, at least not publically anyway, out in front of people where it
mattered. Although no-one had known there was another child.
After the police arrived an ambulance had been called,
kicking off a three-ring-circus of flashing lights. No one liked it, but it
drew them outside where they gathered on their perfectly manicured lawns to
bear witness.
The children were there, huddled together as their father
was brought out of the house in handcuffs. Then their wailing mother appeared, and
there were audible gasps when a blood covered bundle in her arms was spotted.
Everyone wanted to believe it was a new born, maybe a
delivery gone wrong, but their guts told them otherwise as they watched the
medics rush over and lay the little body out on the lawn, displaying what they’d
all missed – a small child of two or three.
Even in the poor light the damage was visible, the contorted
limbs causing some of the neighbours to cry out; the stream of blood from various
locations detailing the torture. And there wasn’t a dry eye in the street when
a sheet was pulled up over him, crying for the shame of their ignorance as much
as for the cruelty the child had endured.
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Miranda, one word: Powerful.
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh. A very powerful and harrowing piece, put together extremely well. x
ReplyDeleteAs has already be said very powerful, just an amazing tale. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone else here - a really powerful tale packed with emotive language and description.
ReplyDeleteThanks all. It's what I saw the moment I saw the photo.
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