This week's photo prompt I have held onto for a while, as I try and change things up every week, and not repeat similar themes. This was taken in a former, now abandoned, TB sanatorium in Grabowsee, Oranienburg, Germany, which is a little north of Berlin. It was taken by someone over on Flicker called Michael.
I felt it offered a wide range of interpretation. Mine, as often is the case, is dark. I'm interested in what it might inspire in others.
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Attainable
She sees
the window but can’t look through it. She yearns to touch it, but can’t reach
it; an illusion she can’t shatter.
She
imagines how it would feel: what breeze would come through it, how it would
light up the room, give her hope. It held a promise the current room she was in
had lost.
She knew it
was unattainable now; she would never experience it again: to look through a
window, feel the air on her face, smell the sweet smells of the outside. All
she could smell in this room was herself: the body odour, the wounds, the
abuse.
He would be
back soon. He had a rigid schedule. She wasn’t the only one he held. But it
wouldn’t be for much longer; she knew that. He didn’t. He still expected to get
more out of her: more screams, more begging, more moans, more pain, more blood.
The mirror
had been a punishment, reflecting her state. But it had been jolted during one
of her days of resistance: a kick here, a push there, a shove causing it to crack
and split. It brought hope.
Footsteps
outside. His hand on the door. She braced herself, clutching the fragment that
would end this. There would be blood, and pain, maybe screams. She hoped for
begging – but none of it from her this time.
Brill prompt this week, I love it
ReplyDeletehttp://strangenotebook.blogspot.co.uk/2017/06/mid-week-flash-in-mirror.html
Wonderful tale, full of emotion. Love it.
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Here's my piece (582 words is not too long is it?) --- it's called Blake's Wake: https://wordpress.com/post/therapscallionblog.wordpress.com/161
ReplyDeleteNot too long at all, the maximum is 750, as mentioned in the general guidelines linked above. Although I will admit to never checking length! I usually get too engrossed in the tale - as I did with yours. I like it, the concept and the dreamy quality of it. Thanks for joining!
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Awesome, awesome story.
Delete*wonders how he got from the picture, and the song, to the story.* Ah. The mysteries of life.
ReplyDeleteJonathan Danced
Wonderful story, such description and emotion. Loved it. Thanks Mark.
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