My first attempt at writing for the picture seemed lack-lustre - particularly in light of the picture. I did make a second attempt but didn't like it, so reworked the first. I hope you enjoy it.
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Lori lay in
the plush surroundings of the room she’d booked for the week, absorbing the
peace and the early morning light that streaked across the thick carpet. The
bed was warm and cosy. She didn’t want to move.
She was
exhausted – physically and emotionally. Touring the country to promote her work
had taken its toll: all the talking, the standing, the pacing on stage, the
networking, the late nights, regurgitating the same old answers to the same old
questions, finding new ways to say the same thing and give the same advice;
eventually the mind gets fuzzy with all that noise.
And then
coming home to find her home gone, her possessions gone, everything she had owned
and all the art she’d had stored there, gone. Her adjoining neighbours were
also gone, the gas explosion having emanated from their boiler, taking the
lives of their children and their pets. It had made her feelings about the loss
of her art seem trivial.
And then it
had all stopped; she hadn’t been able to function. Family took her in, but she
couldn’t get her thoughts together, her mind constantly returning to all the time
and effort that had been wasted, how easily it had gone, and how it all seemed
so pointless now. Every time she attempted to do anything creative she drew a
blank.
So after
more than a year of nothing, despite finding another home and settling again,
and with the pressure to provide more work for sale and exhibition mounting,
she had booked this trip in an attempt to relax and just be for a while,
without any expectation.
As the room
became brighter with the rising sun, Lori was lured out of the bed by
curiosity. She had arrived late the night before, so had yet to glimpse the views
promised when she had made the booking.
She was not
disappointed; the Loch swept away to the horizon, the lodge perched at one end of
it. Sunbeams peeked through broken clouds lighting up the water, creating a
myriad of sparkles that danced across the surface. Lori felt drawn to it. She
wanted to get closer, even touch it if she could.
She dressed
and took the main stairs down, hoping not to encounter any guests or staff. The
early hour afforded her this luxury, and she left through the front door unseen,
striding across the lawns at the front down to the water.
Once there,
she was relieved to find a small strip of shingle enabling her to step into the
water. The cold bit into her toes, but she found the chill refreshing as she
continued in until the water was at her knees.
Lori stood
still, letting the cold numb her lower legs while she watched the light glitter
across the surface. At this angle she felt as though she was a part of the
glimmer, as though it reflected off her too. The warmth of the sunlight kept
her there, disembodied from the knees down.
She
imagined herself floating on the surface, her body rocking with the sway of the
water while her mind drifted with the clouds above. She wanted to stay there
forever, imagining herself a statue like those she used to create. But as the
freezing water started to lap at her thighs, she came too, knowing it was time
to return to the lodge and hopefully breakfast.
Lori went
to turn but nothing happened. At first she thought her feet had gone to sleep,
but her upper body hadn’t moved either. She tried again and nothing happened.
Looking
down, she was shocked to find her torso a beacon of light. It shone out of her,
moving and jostling, scintillating like the light on the water. She moved her
hand to touch it and found her hand reflective too, her eyes captured by its
trancelike qualities. She had become as beautiful as the radiance around her.
She wanted to capture this moment, and recreate it in art.
Her head
buzzed with ideas and this seemed to unlock her. She moved; the light across
her body dying as she turned and waded out of the water, wanting to return to
the lodge and release the images lining up in her mind clamouring to be
created.
The need
for rest and peace was forgotten. Lori’s mind had come alive with what it
needed to construct. This would be her greatest work yet.
Sorry it took me an extra 2 weeks. It's been a depression thing. But, I'm coming out of. Finally. So, I can try to catch up now.
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Never feel you have to write, it is purely optional. This is a great tale, I love it.
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