I planned on being quick off the mark with this week's entry, but despite starting it last Friday, the story took a while to appear and develop. I hope you enjoy it - and this week's prompt picture.
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My Pretty
“Pretty, oh
so pretty, my pretty,” Genghis cooed out of the cell window at the raven who
had become a nightly visitor.
He
suspected who it was and appreciated the gesture. He hoped the bird would bring
him a message, but wondered if the raven was also affected by whatever sorcery
had been placed round the cell. He pondered how they had managed to create a place
where no magic worked.
The raven
cawed and turned its head back and forth indicating something in the sky.
Genghis pulled the wooden stool over and climbed up, trying to see further out
the window.
The moon
was rising and it was getting fat.
Yes! That
was it!
“Ha, ha,
you’re more than just a pretty, my fine feathered friend. Thank you. I know
what to do now.”
The raven cawed
softly in response and flew off. Genghis remained on the stool, working out the
zenith of the moon and when it would light up the cell. He only had 24 hours until
it reached its full potential. It should be long enough.
The
following day he ignored the guard’s visits: their jeers, their swears, and the
gruel they brought him. Genghis had to cleanse himself ready for the moment.
Once the
sun went down he prepared the floor. He had nothing to mark it with, but he
knew the energy from his finger would be enough as he drew the incantation
lines where the moonlight would hit.
He sat in
the middle of the cell floor and waited, moving his mind into a trancelike
state ready for transition.
He felt the
beams cross his body and reach the lines on the floor, the hair on his head rising
in response to the two energy forces colliding - the moons and his.
Then blankness
took him.
When consciousness
returned, he opened his eyes. He was sitting on a polished marble floor which
swept away in all directions to meet marble walls encircling him. There was a
single large window cut into one of them and through it sunlight streamed.
Genghis
smiled. He had arrived. He leapt up and went to the window to see the world
outside, but all he could see was a white glare as though the sunlight was
trapped in a mist. He couldn’t define his location.
The room
had no exit either, which baffled Genghis. He was sure this was Maudlin’s home.
She was the only one who could affect the shape of a raven; it had to be her.
Genghis
heard a caw and the bird appeared on the window ledge, then materialised into the
dark robes Maudlin liked to wrap herself in. She threw back her hood.
“Genghis,
you made it.”
“I did
indeed Maudlin, thank you. But what is this place?”
The smile
on her face increased. “Ah, this is my secret place.”
“Secret
place?”
“Yes Genghis,
where I extract payment.”
“Payment?
For what?”
“For
abuses.”
Ghenghis
was puzzled.
“And how have
I abused you, Maudlin?”
“You defiled
my sister.”
“Your
sister?”
“What did
they arrest you for, Ghenghis? Did you think it was just for being a sorcerer?”
Ghenghis
did think that. The girl had been used as bait, he was sure of it.
“She was
nothing but a decoy, a fake, a peasant to entrap me.”
“Oh no,
Ghenghis, she was real and she was my blood.”
“But I only
did it to show them, to prove to them that I saw through their games.”
“It seems
your paranoia got the better of you, Ghenghis.”
His eyes
widened. “But Maudlin you have to believe me, I intended no disrespect, no
desire to cross you.”
“It’s too
late, Ghenghis, you are here now.”
“And where exactly
is here?”
“A plane
where things like to visit.”
Ghenghis
felt his breath catch and his flesh ripple as cold swept over it. He knew the
things that liked to visit in other planes; they haunted every sorcerer’s nightmares.
“But
Maudlin, please you have to forgive me.”
She turned
her back and walked to the window. He followed, imploring her further.
“You have
to understand, I had no idea who the girl was.”
“I’m sorry,
Ghenghis, it is already done.”
Her form
shrank back until only a raven was perched on the windowsill. It cawed at him,
its steely black eyes perusing him once more before it flew off.
Ghenghis
fell to his knees in the pool of sunlight. Once that disappeared he knew his
life was forfeit.
Managed it this week! Sorry I've been dipping in and out so much!
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Wonderful and heartbreaking! Here is a link for other readers to enjoy it:
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And. I caught up. :) As usual. Don't ask where the story came from. I have no idea.
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Well, I can with what is currently going on in the world. A desperate tale, I hope no one is living through. Thanks for joining Mark.
DeleteI loved everyone's tales this week, and the picture is so beautiful, I had to write! Wild Harbour
ReplyDeleteGlad it brought you out. An emotional rollercoaster of a tale. Thanks for writing.
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