This image encompasses different elements, which together represent the journey of my life over the last 16 years, so I couldn't write it as a fiction tale, only as prose.
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Release
I felt stuck.
There was no life
here.
Not for me.
Everything was
obligation, expectation, and desperation.
I felt tied.
I couldn’t set myself
free.
People talked about
finding the key, but I couldn’t even find the door.
The more I struggled
to find a way out, the heavier the chains felt.
I was weighted down.
I could no longer lift
my head, let alone my body.
I withdrew.
From the people
surrounding me and from the people I’d drawn to me.
They held no
solutions.
They told me not to
focus on it.
They told me not to
think about it.
They told me it was
all in my head and I was looking at it the wrong way.
I moved my head round
so much to see it from different perspectives, my neck hurt.
In fact it almost
broke.
I went away to try and
‘get some perspective’.
All I found was emptiness
and the obligation to return.
There was nothing
else.
The grass wasn’t
greener.
I had to water my own.
But there were no
seeds.
Then one day someone
mentioned a place.
Not a real place, an
illusion of a place, somewhere in the ether.
In fact in the Ethernet.
It was a void that
sometimes spoke back.
You followed people
and people followed you.
You could find people,
the right people, people that understood.
You could talk and be
heard.
And talk when you didn’t
want to be heard.
Yet not a word was
spoken only written.
It opened a whole new world
of possibilities.
A place to dream.
A place to create.
A place to forget about
the obligations and the desperation.
A place that made the
chains feel temporary and freedom possible.
A place of hope.
A place carried on the
wings of a bird.
Inspiring & positive. Happy ending :)
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Great little piece. Very potent. Thanks for taking part.
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Love this, Mark, I feel it!
DeleteExceptional piece. Love it. Thanks for joining in.
DeleteLoving this one! Wrote it yesterday and forgot to post it...
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Reminded me of my teens! LOL Left me with a smile. Thanks for joining in.
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