This week's picture prompt was created by Eric Frey, a French photographer. He has some really captivating work. Take a look on Art Limited, or on his account on Flickr. He calls this one 'Mirage'.
I was unsure if this story was where I wanted to go, but their voices were insistent, and I've ended up really like it. This could be part of a much bigger story. Food for thought!
I was unsure if this story was where I wanted to go, but their voices were insistent, and I've ended up really like it. This could be part of a much bigger story. Food for thought!
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UFO
“What do you think it is, Jack?”
“I don’t know, Duncan.” They eyed the
strange object in the sky from their comfy spot on the beach. They liked it
down here at night, it was nice and quiet.
“I don’t trust it.”
“You don’t trust anything since the
invasion.” Jack laughed.
“Do you blame me? This is their type of
tricky shit.”
“True. But it’s floating up there. They came
from under the ground.”
“Maybe, but I still don’t trust it.”
“It’s not moving very fast.”
“There ain’t much wind.”
“Was it here last night when you can down
to the beach with Darlene?” Duncan asked.
“Nope.” Jack took a swig from his bottle.
“It was just the usual plain dark sky.”
“Do you see how it shines onto the water
too?”
“Yep.”
“How’s that happening?”
“I’ve no idea.”
“This is freaky shit. We ought to call Bert
down here.”
“He don’t like being disturbed at night.
He’s up early out there all day keeping those things at bay over on the North
Quarter. I don’t think we should bother him.”
“But this is important, not like when we
called him out for that water fish thing.”
“Whale, it was a whale – that’s what he
called it.”
“Never seen nothing like it.”
“Neither had I.” Jack remembered how Bert
had raged for a full hour about it, calling them names they hadn’t understood.
“What was it he called us?”
“Numb skulls I think it was. Some old folk
term. He loves those.”
“Yes, and nit wit or something. What do you
think they mean?”
“I think they’re mean drop head, or that we’re
like the Jonas brothers. But he’s wrong. We know more than they do.” Duncan
threw his empty bottle out behind him onto the sand where the others were. “But
this is different. He’ll want to know about this.”
Duncan got up and pulled the device out of
his pocket. He fumbled the buttons. If THEY heard him there’d be in trouble –
it wouldn’t be the first time they’d had to run for their lives. He heard the
strange buzzing noise it made before it connected. Then there was a funny
squeal and a voice.
“What?”
“It’s Dunc, Bert, you gotta come and look
at this.”
“Where are you?”
“The Beach.”
“Not another bloody fish.”
“No, something in the sky.”
There was a pause, then, “Okay, I’m on my
way.”
Duncan and Jack resumed their drinking,
opening fresh root beers. The thing was still floating there even though it had
shifted over a bit.
It wasn’t long before they heard Bert’s
boots clobbering on the board walk down to the sand.
“Well I’ll be damned!”
His exclamation made them turn to him.
“What is it Bert, some kind of strange
hocus pocus? What did the invaders cook up this time?” Duncan’s mouth had
fallen open in anticipation.
“It’s a cloud.”
“A what?” The boys spoke in unison turning
back, goggling at the object.
“We ain’t seen one of those in decades, not
since before the war.”
“What does it mean?” Jack didn’t take his
eyes off it.
“It’s means things are coming back, cycles
are returning. This is a good omen.”
“But should it glow like that, Bert?”
Duncan was sure it was wrong.
Bert’s face fell. “Only if there was moon
light on it.”
“Moonlert? What’s that?” Jack asked.
“Moon light. There used to be a big planet
up there that the sun used to reflect off at night. We called it the moon and
the reflecting light moonlight. ‘twas pretty. But the invaders killed that too.
And the cycles stopped, cycles which created clouds – what that thing there is.
But that glowing ain’t right.”
“Knew it!” Duncan grinned at Jack, whose
eyes were still on Bert.
“That glow means radiation. That means it’s
picking it up from over Eastwards where the worst of the bombs were.”
“Those nuclear ones, Bert?” Jack knew
things too.
“Yep, those ones, Jack. They carry mean
stuff in them that caused all that death after the explosions were long over.
And if clouds start up again they’re gonna start carrying that stuff around.”
“What should we do, Bert?” Duncan was
standing now, ready for action. Jack joined him.
“Nothing we can do, Dunc. But I need to go
tell the elders. This is gonna change things.”
As Bert hurried away, Duncan and Jack looked
at each other, eyes wide and followed Bert.
A future unfortunate reality perhaps... Can't imagine our Planet Earth without our Moon.
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The Anniversary Gift - Anita
Yes, I can't imagine it either, and I think more would change than cycles maybe. But it's a writer's playground. I liked your little piece too.
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