This is the kind of tale that could turn into something much much bigger. And maybe it will, one day. I left it hanging to suit the word count.
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Portent
They appeared a few months after one of the severe
storms. Emily had discovered them on her way to school – well school, it was
what was left of a once thriving community, a collection of people trying to
hold onto some kind of routine, some kind of connection in a world that was
rapidly changing in a drastic and violent manner.
The storms were new but the forecasts for them weren’t.
There’d been warnings about their impending arrival for decades, but no one had
believed they would happen. Everyone had thought it was just hype, something to
sell clicks on news websites and that the root causes would be resolved. They
hadn’t been. World governments had claimed to start changing environmental
policies, but it had been too little, too late.
The upside of the storms was they had brought down
those news websites and those governments. In fact they had destroyed the
entire network and brought such destruction mankind was struggling to hold on.
Emily didn’t mind though. Without the network there was less distraction and
less haste. She preferred that. There was more time to do things, like observe
the world around you. And when she had come across the stone figures in the
dried mud she’d done just that – observed them.
She wondered if they were real people and the mud
had just dried onto them making them look like stone, but she wasn’t going to
venture out across the mudflat to find out. It had ruptured up from the earth
below, bubbled up as a result of activity far below, so it wasn’t stable despite
appearances. A couple of boys at school had tried, fortunately they’d been
rescued.
But these figures didn’t look like people caught in
the destruction; there were no expressions of anguish or bodies contorted in defensive
shapes, just straight, identical sentinels. It was unnerving.
And when Emily told her teacher about them, she
heard they weren’t the only ones; others had appeared in the towns nearby too. Her
teacher had tried to hide her concern, but Emily had sensed it, and discussed
it with her friends at break time.
‘Aliens!’
‘You say that about everything, Gerrad. I don’t
think they can be,’ Emily replied.
‘Why not?’
‘Because they’ve come from underground, that’s why,
dufus!’ Spencer cuffed the back of Gerrad’s head.
‘Ow! Just because they’re underground doesn’t mean
they aren’t aliens!’
‘He’s right you know,’ Natasha added, while busy filing
her nails. ‘They could’ve already been here. Like they were in that movie with
Tom Cruise – you know the one, War something ...’
‘Of the Worlds,’ Spencer finished. ‘Good movie. I
miss movies.’
‘You can still watch them on DVD,’ Gerrad suggested.
‘I know. But I miss the excitement of new ones.’
‘Going to be a long time before they make any new
ones with California gone.’
‘I know.’ Spencer sighed.
‘I think they’re some kind of portent,’ said Emily.
‘What’s a portent?’ Natasha asked.
‘A sign that something bad is going to happen,’
Spencer answered. ‘But hasn’t that happened already?’
‘Or is still happening?’ added Gerrad.
‘Yes, I know, but this is something else. We’ve
trashed the planet, and maybe these ... “things” are going to do something,
like take over or something.’
‘Sounds scary,’ said Natasha.
Emily shrugged. ‘Maybe, maybe not. We always assume
something is bad, but why can’t it be good. Maybe they’re going to straighten things
out. Save humanity.’
‘Give us hope, you mean?’ Spencer asked.
‘Yeah, why not?’
They fell silent. None of them wanted to consider
that. Hope was a big word to bandy about these days.
‘Anyway, I’m going to take another look on my way
home from school. Who’s coming?’ Emily looked round at the group. They all
nodded.
That afternoon, having been let out early due to
another storm warning, they walked home together. The wind was already picking
up though, so they didn’t hang around and only stopped once they arrived at the
open expanse of the mudflat. Emily gasped.
‘What’s wrong?’ Gerrad looked ready to run.
‘They’ve grown!’ Emily said.
‘What do you mean “grown”?’ Spencer asked.
‘They were only chest high this morning when I
walked by.’
Silence fell as they heard a cracking sound and the
feet of two statues cleared the mud. The children froze until further movement
broke their paralysis and they ran for home. The statues had turned as though
watching them go.
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