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Gone
It first
occurred when the hair dresser tried to show Lucinda the back of her hair. She couldn’t see
it; her head wasn’t there. The strange thing was she could see herself in the
mirror in front of her, just not in the one held by the hairdresser when
showing her the back.
If
the hairdresser hadn’t freaked, she could have pretended she had seen her hair
and gone home and processed the event there. But the stylist got hysterical,
especially after testing it out on her other clients and it only being Lucinda.
Lucinda
had dropped cash on the counter and rushed out.
At
home she tested it out herself. It was handheld mirrors – she tried several of
them. It’s like she was invisible in them. She even turned her back to the full
length mirror and faced the handheld. There was no reflection of her face in
the handheld mirror, but she could see the full length mirror reflected and her
back in it. It was bizarre.
Lucinda
went into her sister’s bedroom and tried it out on her, making some excuse
about her new haircut and wanting to compare it. The back of her sister’s head
showed just fine in the mirror. However, she made sure her sister didn’t see
her reflection – or non-reflection.
She
did the same with her brother and her mother and again, theirs were perfectly
normal. In the large oval hallway mirror she could see herself, but when she
took it off the wall she disappeared. It made no sense.
But
when she attempted to hang the mirror back onto the wall, her thumb slipped and
disappeared into the mirror. She paused, looking at her thumbless hand clasping
the mirror. She wiggled her thumb, she could feel it move, but there was no
movement on the surface of the mirror. She drew her hand back, her thumb was
intact.
She
needed to investigate further, so she took the mirror up to her bedroom and
shut her door. She propped it up against her bed. She sat cross legged in front
of it and reached out, putting her index finger against the surface. But there
was no surface, her finger vanished. Again no ripple; the surface was not liquid,
it just wasn’t there. But she couldn’t see her finger. She could only see the
reflection of the wardrobe behind her.
She
pulled her hand back. Her finger was unchanged.
She
laid the mirror flat on the floor and stood. She dipped a bare toe in, it
disappeared, and then she put her whole foot in until the ankle. She did a sort
of hokey cokey with it: in out, in out, shaking it about. It was normal.
She
knelt down on one knee and lowered her entire leg in. There was no resistance,
nothing to stop her. She then moved round onto her bottom and lowered her other
leg in to join it, right up to her thighs and sat there swinging them about –
or at least that’s what it felt like. There was no sensation. It was like she
was dangling them over a building, she just couldn’t see them.
Then
she turned herself round, laying face down on the floor, her legs still inside
the mirror, and slowly shuffled her body further and further in, until only her
arms, shoulders and head were out. Her arms taking her weight, because there
was nothing under her feet.
She
contemplated letting go. Wondering what she would drop into; wondering what was
on the other side of the mirror. She debated until her arms started to ache, and
then she thought, why not? And let go.
***
A
few hours later her mother came upstairs. She’d called her for dinner and had no
reply. She knocked on her bedroom door. No answer. She opened the door and found
Lucinda’s room empty, the hallway mirror lying on the floor. She tutted and
picked it up, taking it back downstairs with her, while calling for Lucinda
again. She hung it back on the wall and adjusted her hair in it, and went back
into the kitchen.
How will Lucinda come back?
ReplyDeleteWish her mom knew & had left the mirror in the same place.
Hope changing the position won't affect Lucinda's chances of return...
All really good questions. Or maybe she has just vanished into thin air! Thanks for reading.
DeleteI was a bit confused when I saw the words "hokey cokey" in your story. What was that? I know what a hokey pokey is, but I'd never heard of hokey cokey. Had to look it up.
ReplyDeleteFrom the Internet:
"The hokey cokey (United Kingdom, the Caribbean and Israel) or hokey pokey (United States, Canada, Ireland, Australia and New Zealand) is a participation dance with a distinctive accompanying tune and lyric structure."
Now it all makes sense. Maybe she'll find a white rabbit down there!