This week, not a story I wish to expand on! LOL But it's a while since I've had a nice dark tale.
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Rats
I was sitting at my desk when I first
noticed the sound. I wasn’t sure if it was a new sound, or whether it was
something I had only just registered. But to register it now meant it had to
have changed, right?
I tried to identify the location it was coming
from. It was a pretty large loft, but with my desk under the skylight I tended
to ignore the dark corners. They were full of dust and storage boxes only the
cats ever bothered investigating, although coming to think of it, I hadn’t seen
Minxy go that way for a while.
Was it getting louder? I couldn’t be sure.
It could just be me tuning into it. It was more than a buzzing, it was a
strange humming – not electrical; like a collective of people chanting in the
distance, but a long way off.
I opened the skylight. Nope, definitely not
coming from outside. When I shut it, it definitely seemed louder. Then a scratching
sound joined it.
It had to be the cat. I got up to walk
towards the corner it was coming from, but as I turned to face it, I heard the
cat flap. I paused looking towards the stairs. Was it Minxy? A pitiful miaow
could be heard. Yep, it was Minxy. My head flicked back to the strange clawing
sound. I felt the hair lift on my arms, and my stomach clenched. I had to do
this; I had to find out what it was.
My rational mind tried to de-escalate the
rising panic: it’s just an old kids toy,
maybe a battery left in there, giving off one last dying cry, or vibration.
But the irrational wasn’t working with it: you always take batteries out of everything
before putting it away, you know that.
I took a few steps closer.
Maybe
a bird’s caught.
Maybe
it’s a giant rat that’s going to eat you.
I picked up an old hockey stick poking out
of one of the boxes as I inched closer.
I’ll
hit it with this.
What
if there’s a horde of them?
I was almost there.
What’s
the collective noun for rats?
I
don’t know! You and your damn writer brain!
I raised the hockey stick above my head as
I reached the box. The scratching was distinct now; something was definitely
trying to burrow out.
‘ Mischief! It’s a Mischief of Rats!’ I
shouted out loud as I kicked the box.
The lid flapped open and the sound stopped,
the sight that greeted me making everything stop.
Faces: all their tiny little faces staring
up at mine with their red-ringed, hollow eyes. I dropped the stick and opened
my mouth to scream but it remained in an O, no breath moving in and out until
the sound resumed: the humming. But I could see it wasn’t really humming, they
were saying something, over and over, a mantra of some sort. Then their little hands
came up and I saw them grip the open edge of the box. They were going to come
out.
My paralysis broke and I turned to run, but
I slipped on the hockey stick and fell hard on my back. I tried to scrabble
backwards but it was too late, they were out, and flew at me, smothering me
before I could move any further. Their voices rang in my head as I felt them
trample and tear at my body, and then I was flying, out of my mind out of my
body, watching myself be devoured as I floated up to the roof and through.
Their words making sense now: ‘sustenance, sustenance, sustenance ...’
Love your take on that creep old picture, Miranda. Reminds me of the Indian in Cupboard but in a much more frightening way.
ReplyDeleteI don't know the reference, but I think yours was creepier than mine!
DeleteHere is my story for the prompt: Ancient Aliens hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteYours beats mine for creepiness hands down!! Terrifying, yet brilliant. Thanks for joining.
DeleteThanks for letting me play, and for challenging me to be a better writer!
DeleteYour's gave me the heebie-jeebies. Here's mine - How Kevin Foiled the Alien Invasion of Earth
ReplyDeleteQuirky and funny, and - even though you don't like his stuff - a touch Pratchett-esk. There's an underline message in there somewhere. Thanks for joining.
DeleteTeenagers by David Lunn Milburn
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Jacqueline Brissonette was a very good cello player. She also made love like she had a quota to fill, energetically and with a purpose. Which explains why I took Music Theory as an elective for several semesters. Being in her presence was intoxicating to say the least and somewhere along the way, I learned to read the notes. She went on to study at Julliard, I wound up playing guitar in a garage band.
We weren’t much when we started but as the years passed, we developed into a tight-knit group, good enough to charge money. Had to find a new drummer when Harry walked in front of a bus one night but his replacement turned out pretty good, plus she was a lot better looking so, ultimately, no complaints.
Our versatility kept us in front of the competition. We played everything, from Reggae Rock to Armenian Rock to Cock Rock. Part of the fun was seeing how many ways the same teenagers could dress up for each genre and look just as daft every time. It was easy for me. As long as you put the music in front of me, I could adapt to the different rhythms. Then it was just a matter of getting up on stage and flailing around as though we had just made it up.
I eventually grew weary of it all, of course, and left the scene. Smart phones had arrived and the teens had adapted too. Nothing like facing 300 girls all texting each other while you pour your heart into a song.
All seemed pointless somehow.
I got a call from the bass player Tracy one night, months later. He had a gig set up in an abandoned hanger, a new type of music, sort of a cross between Goth and Elton John. He had a couple of sheets of notes to show me so I went for it. We got our gear set up on the stage behind a huge curtain.
The curtain drew back and I got my first look at the audience. I assumed they would all be texting but what I saw was mind blowing.
These were the best damn costumes I’d ever seen and I said so to Tracy.
“No mate, those are teenagers, they never stopped adapting after you left. They all look like that now.”
He added, “So play good my friend, they take their music real serious!”
Thanks for the creepy inspiration. Here’s my tale!
ReplyDeleteFacing the Dark
Phew! That was scary! Thanks for joining.
DeleteSneaking in under the wire...
ReplyDeleteThe Faceless
Brilliant entry, I need the whole story now! Thanks for joining.
DeleteThank you! I'm definitely enjoying the writing... just not entirely sure where it's going yet. :)
DeleteJust so this one doesn't get lost:
ReplyDeleteCarrie Anne Golden wrote this rather spooky tale.
Twitter: @cagolden71
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