I had the opening line to this one days before I wrote it, which sometimes happens, but I've had such a busy time of it, I haven't had a chance to get it down. A bit last night and finishing touches today. I wondered if it was going to go darker, but it didn't.
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The Song of the Dandelions
He watched her
looking up at them in awe. The moonlight made them sparkle and vibrate with the
glow that bounced off them. Giant metal Dandelions, who would have thought such
a thing would mesmerise a girl so much. She had no idea he was there, on the
other side of the street, staring at her. She was lost in her fascination. And
in some ways he was lost in his.
He admired her agile body as it stood
mid-stride, poised as though on pause as the sculptured flowers caught her
attention. He imagined it in other poses, ones that made it uncomfortable for
him to remain standing in his current position for much longer.
A ripple through the fronds of the imposing
seed heads brought an eerie high-pitched sound, like the ghost of a violin. It spooked
her and she started moving, glancing across the street at him and registering
his existence, including his cool appraisal of her. It provoked a worried
expression, and after one more peek over her shoulder at the fake blooms, she rushed
off.
He debated following her, but knew that no
matter what was in his mind, it would never cross hers, in fact after the look
she’d given him it would scare her.
The sound again from the glistening flowers
brought his gaze back to them. They were a marvel and a delight, even if only
for being a girl magnet as he watched another approach from the train station,
fresh faced and eager to see what had emitted the sound.
This one he might dare to approach, the
whisper of the flower effigies lulling him into the idea as it entranced him
and the new girl. He drifted across the road and struck up a conversation about
what they were viewing. She responded with a smile and they’re conversation
continued as they walked away. He hoped to a pub for a drink and then after ...
who knew.
Lovely piece, Miranda. This could be the innocuous open scene to a dark and terrifying stalker story though. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteMaybe somewhere in the back of my mind that was the plan, but I ran out of time! LOL
DeleteWell maybe a future project. I loved it anyway.
DeleteHere is my story for those magnificent Dandelions. I don't believe it possible to write something about them that shines like they do, so I didn't Here is Dandelions and Magnolia Hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a gorgeous warm and fuzzy tale! Thanks for joining. Loved it.
DeleteAw, I'm glad you oved it.
DeleteBeen a while since I've popped over. Nice to see you again. Here's a link to my little story. 'Tick Tock, Dandelion Clock'
ReplyDeletehttps://www.awalker.org/WriterersBlock/files/851488e02f776c8628c306e16a91dab0-374.php
Great story, thanks for joining.
DeleteHere's a clickable link: Tick Tock, Dandelion Clock