Took me a while but I quite like this one. Who knows, it might turn into a serial. I've not done one of those in a while.
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At The Bottom
They drove south, in two cars, to find
where it had landed, and came across the crater by a large, sprawling town. They
worked their way round the deserted town, expecting to find devastation and
destruction, but they found neat and tidy, and empty, homes. They looked for
people, but there was no one living or dead. Where had everyone gone? It was
clear it had been inhabited only days before: food was fresh in the fridges,
homes were clean, cars weren’t covered in dust of any sort; electricity still
worked and water still ran.
So they turned their attention to the
landing site. They travelled the perimeter of the immense circular hole in the
ground, bigger than a small town, and began to see something they didn’t
expect: roads.
They spiralled round and down, each with a
small plateau large enough for a vehicle – and not just any vehicle, mining
vehicles. This was a mine, and yet their GPS also confirmed it was the site of
the meteor crash. Could the meteor have landed inside the mine? It was
possible. Had the people been evacuated? After several calls to different
agencies there was no evidence of any such instruction, plus with cars in
driveways and houses still fully stocked it didn’t appear that such an
undertaking had taken place, so what had happened here?
Jerrod was the first to suggest it, and Christine
wasn’t in agreement, but after much debate and with Floyd giving the casting
vote, a decision was made that six out of the eight of them would travel in their
two cars down into the mine to see what they could find.
Christine and Albert would stay behind at
the top, using one of the civilian cars to wait in, and be on the receiving end
of the walkie talkie should anything happen.
Christine had a bad feeling about it.
Albert tried to jolly her along, but she struggled to be upbeat as they
listened intently to the others. The drive to the bottom seemed uneventful but
then static started to interrupt their broadcast.
“I’m not sure ... was that? ... ... hear it
too? ... do that, no!” It was Jerrod.
“Shit! ... they’re ... the car! Look ..., no ... out now! Come ...”
Floyd’s voice.
They heard the screeching of tyres and
scraping of metal. Then they heard some kind of chanting, lots of voices, like
some kind of collective. Christine could feel the hairs rise on her arms.
“Get ... from ... No! Leave ... alone!” It
was Jerrod. He started screaming as did the others in his car.
Albert started the engine.
“What are you doing?”
“Going in there, we can’t just leave them!”
“Yes we bloody well can!”
“Then get out of the car; I’m going in!”
Albert leaned across Christine and opened her door, shoving at her as she undid
her seat belt. She snatched up the walkie talkie and got out, just having
enough time to slam the door as he drove off. To his death, Christine was sure.
Then Floyd’s voice came through.
“Christine, Albert ... you ... me?” He was
panting heavily.
Christine could hear the sound of tyres on
gravel, he was driving. She quickly depressed the button on the walkie talkie.
“I’m here Floyd, I’m listening. Albert is
on his way to you.”
“We’re ... our ... back. Don’t ... anywhere.”
“I can’t hear you very well, Floyd.”
There was no more sound just blasting
static. She hated it and wanted to switch it off, but didn’t dare. Then she
spotted cars moving along one of the roads, winding their way round and round.
It was Albert’s car and Floyd’s. Jerrod’s wasn’t with them.
She waited, hoping the static would clear.
It didn’t. Then she saw the cars coming towards her, and Albert’s face. He was
screaming something, and beckoning at her. She looked at the other car, at
Floyd and two of the others, they were smiling but there was something wrong
with their faces. As the car got closer she saw it was their eyes, they had
changed shaped and the colour wasn’t right, they were all black and shiny.
Then the passenger door of Albert’s car
flew open and his words reached her, “Get in! Quick!” She leapt into the
passenger seat while the car was moving and he sped off.
“What is it? What’s wrong with them?”
“I don’t know, but I’m not stopping to find
out!”
Well, it took a few days, but I figured out one way to tell that story. Here. Read and laugh.
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Brilliant concept. Love it.
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