I have had the opening of this story in my head ever since I spotted this picture. It is sort of my nod to Stephen King's magnificent novel, The Stand, but doesn't come close to the fantastic tale or characters he weaves in that. This book also reminds me of The Dark Tower series - which crosses over with The Stand - and Blane the Pain (DT No.3). Interested to know what others see in this picture.
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The Power
of Books
“Have you
ever ridden on one of these, dad?”Jasper climbed up the side of the old rusted steam
train.
“Maybe once
or twice, when I was young like you, but these were already past my time when I
was a boy. The trains we used to ride on were electric.”
“E-lec-tric?
What does that mean dad?”
“It means
they worked using electricity, and not steam like this old train.”
“What is
ele-triz-eaty?”
“ElectriCITY.
It was a form of power, it made things go.”
Jasper was
up in the cabin now, fiddling with the rusted lever. He glanced at his dad, who
could see he didn’t understand.
“Power is like
energy it makes things work. With this old thing ...” Paul patted the metal
side of the engine, “you had to burn coal in there.” He pointed to the furnace.
“Which then heated water in there,” he pointed to an area above the furnace, “and
the hot steam would push the pistons round which would make the wheels turn.”
Jasper looked at every place his dad pointed. “But although electricity was
created the same way, it was made in huge power plants and stored in big
generators, so they could send it through wires to different things and places,
including lights for homes and ovens and TVs.” Paul knew his son didn’t know
what any of those things were, but he enjoyed remembering them and attempting
to pass on the knowledge.
“So what
happened to all the power?”
“It stopped
being made.”
“Why?”
“Because
there were no people to make it anymore.”
“Was that
when all the people got sick?”
“Yes.”
“Did you
get sick too, Dad?”
“No,
Jasper, I didn’t otherwise I wouldn’t be here either. I was one of the lucky
ones. I was immune.”
“Ee-moon?
What does that mean?”
“It means I
can’t catch it. And neither can you.”
Jasper
stopped fiddling with the engine and sat down in the cab, hanging his legs over
the edge, and looked down intently at his dad. Paul could see him thinking.
“Do people
still get sick, dad?”
“Not
anymore, Jasper, no. All the people who are left are all immune too.”
“Good. It
doesn’t sound like it was good.”
Paul smiled
at how simply his son stated the catastrophic event.
“It wasn’t,
billions of people died all over the world.”
“Will we
ever have electree-city again, dad?”
“I don’t
know son, maybe. There aren’t many people left who know how to make it, but
there should be books somewhere that we can read that will tell us, if we can
find them.”
“Can you
read, dad?”
“Yes. I
can.”
“Can you
teach me?”
“I can, but
we have to find some books first.”
“Where are
they?”
“In the
towns, you know, where all the buildings are.”
“Where the
bad people live?”
Paul’s
smile dropped when he thought about how bad it had gotten in the cities. It was
why he and Jeanie had left to live in the desert. “Yes, like where the bad
people live.”
“Will they
let us have some books?”
“I’m not
sure. It depends if they have been burning them or not.”
“Why would
they do that?”
“To keep
warm, or use the flames for light.”
“But if
they burn the books we won’t know how to make power!” Jasper was outraged.
“That’s
true. But maybe we can find another town where there aren’t bad people.”
“How?”
“By walking
that way?” Paul pointed to the hills in the distance.
“It looks a
long way.”
“It is.”
Jasper
looked back at the tent he called home, the only one he had known since his
birth five years earlier.
“Will mum come
too?”
“Of course.
We’ll all go.”
“Good.”
Paul saw
his partner on the horizon, carrying something on her shoulder.
“Come on,
let’s go see what your mum’s caught.”
“Yummy!
Food!”
Jasper
jumped down and went running towards his mum. Paul looked on. Whatever she was
carrying was big. He hoped it meant they could feed themselves up before the
big journey.
I always love your ideas. Here's mine: 'The Train Now Arriving'
ReplyDeleteLove this, love the depth and the metaphor. Excellent. Thanks for joining.
DeleteAs with many of my tales, it says virtually nothing. I have measured its value only by the number of words and the challenge of fitting something within the word limit. I should probably do this again, it was harder than my usual self-imposed limits.
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Ooo what a cliffhanger. Nice little tale withe great characterservice. Thanks for joining.
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