It was easy to come up with this tale and hear these characters but it was a struggle to find any kind of twist, so it is just a piece of what could be a larger work.
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Game of Crowns
Kalic
didn’t know where Karnie had hidden it but he knew that once the papers were
produced Karnie would have no choice but to concede. Just one more day and it
would need to be back in the throne room ready for the coronation.
But who
would be crowned?
It was the
question on all their minds. Twins born just minutes apart, but which one came
first?
Their
mother had died years ago and everyone assumed their father knew, but the onset
of dementia meant he was no longer present to declare it.
Kalic
clearly remember his mother telling him was first: her blue-eyed raven arrived
first, she’d always said. He was the one with thick black hair, whereas Karnie’s
was blond. But as his brother towered over him, people assumed it was the other
way round. He was always referred to as ‘the little brother’.
It meant
the papers had to be found, showing the exact time of birth, and stupidly they
were kept at Great Bander, the strong hold in the North.
Kalic
didn’t trust it. They could be interfered with at any stage of the journey, so
he had gone personally. He had not viewed them, simply collected them. They
would be looked at upon his return with his brother present.
He stormed
into the East Wing of Castle Rossinda, Karnie’s side of the home they shared.
“Where is
he? I want to see him now!” he yelled at the servants.
They
scuttled before him, as he strode further into his brother’s domicile. Then a
voice reached him: “I’m here brother, what are you so blustered about?”
Kalic
pushed open the doors to the south entrance of the lounge and stomped in, the
sight of Karnie lazing on the sofa with a book enraging him further.
“Where is
it? There’ll be no pronouncement until you produce it!” he bellowed.
Karnie’s
puzzled eyes met his. “What, Kalic? Produce what?”
“The crown
you fool!”
“The crown?
Why would I have that?”
“To stall
the process and stop me from my rightful place on the throne.”
“Since when
have I ever opposed your claim to the throne?”
Kalic
halted. “Always!”
Karnie sat
up. “What lies! I don’t want the job!”
“You always
argued with father about everything, thinking you could do better, and threatened
to do so.”
Karnie
laughed. “He’s an old fool stuck in his ways. He has no idea how to rule a
progressive state, whereas I have every confidence in you.”
Kalic
slumped down into an armchair opposite his brother.
“Oh. So
where’s the crown?”
“No idea.”
“But the
coronation can’t happen without it.”
“Where did
you see it last?”
“I presumed
it was in the antiquities room, but it’s not.”
“The room
next to father’s?”
“Yes.”
“He’s
probably taken it then.”
“Why would
he do that?”
“In his
foggy state he gets quite riled up worried his throne will be taken from him.”
“What,
still?”
“Yes.”
“Come on.
Let’s go and get it.”
“What, me
too?”
“Oh yes,
I’ll need you.”
“Eh?”
They made
their way to their father’s chambers in the back of the castle. It smelled of
musty old belongings, which, Kalic supposed, their father was too now. They
found him dancing round his rooms, naked but for a robe, the crown firmly
planted on his head.
“Father,
we’ve come for the crown,” Kalic said.
He stopped
and put his hand on his head, grasping the crown. “I’ll never give it up!”
“Not even
to your sons?” Kalic asked.
Their
father paused, stepping up to them, inspecting their faces. Kalic could smell illness
and decay on his breath.
“My sons,
are you sure?”
“We’re
sure,” said Karnie.
He
continued to inspect them, then suddenly grabbed Karnie’s shirt and ripped it
off. The strength he possessed was no surprise to them; their father had been a
great warrior in his day.
Karnie’s
chest exposed a childhood scar. Their father nodded. “ ‘Tis you, there is no
doubt.”
And with
that he swept the crown off his head and plonked it on Kalic’s.
Karnie
looked surprised. “How did you know he would do that?”
“Because we
are his sons, brother, the only people he still knows and trusts.”
This
touched Karnie who stayed to settle their father and help dress him. They
escorted him to the great hall for a banquet dinner, knowing it’d be his last
as king. Despite his broken state they wanted to celebrate his reign while he
was still with them.
Masie and Richard
ReplyDeleteI now need to know where they went! Brilliant use of the prompt. Really enjoyed that.
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