I could see the opening of this tale immediately, but the story took longer to appear, although not in depth. It was tricky only hinting at it without really knowing what it was about but pretending I did!
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The Establishment
Dorian
staggered into the square, holding onto the wall of the alleyway he was coming
through. He sensed people looking at him, but all he could see were the
buildings in the plaza swaying and wobbling. Was this actually happening? He
couldn’t be sure but he was mesmerized by them.
The
architecture took on new meaning as it reshaped before his eyes. He had a
growing desire to go up and touch them. He moved forward, the ground rolled
under his feet. He staggered again, this
time falling to his knees. He looked around him. The people he thought were
there weren’t; the cafe terraces were empty, not a sole in the streets.
The
buildings were still moving. Dorian crawled to the edge of one to put his hand
against it. He could feel it vibrate through his palm. He rubbed the brickwork.
It felt real.
Then he
heard a voice.
“Mr.
Bradshaw, tell us how you got here?”
Dorian
looked around him again; there was still no one in the plaza. Who was speaking?
“Who are
you? Where are you? Show yourself!” He didn’t like the swaying anymore; it was making
him feel sick.
“You know
who we are, Mr. Bradshaw, and you know why we are not showing ourselves.”
Dorian felt
something nag at the back of his mind, something before he stumbled into the
plaza. Where was he before he was here? He fought to gain a hold on his memory.
How did he get here? He remembered the alleyway between two buildings. What two
buildings? He remembered a plane journey; he remembered a city, sweet scent of
trees baked in the sun. He was in Italy! Yes, Genoa. But why? He was tracking
something, or was it someone? Why couldn’t he remember?
“If you
know me, you know why I am here. Stop messing with my head and talk to me!”
Dorian could barely raise his head now. He understood that what was happening
was not real; it was a magnetic field that worked on his mind; an illusion to
disorientate him, to put him off the scent. “I’m not leaving until you do, and
remember I am being tracked.”
Those last
words brought everything back into sharp focus: He knew why he was here and
what his plan had been. Their tricks couldn’t work anymore.
The plaza
faded. The blank wall it had been projected onto took its place. The wall was
grey concrete. It had been real. He had managed to get inside.
Dorian
heard footsteps and slumped back into a sitting position on the floor, resting
his back against the wall. The men that appeared didn’t look happy.
“How did
you get in here? How did you find us?”
Dorian
smiled. “You should be concerning yourself with what my arrival means, and how
long you have got.”
The two men
glanced at each other clearly unnerved by Dorian’s words. Then another set of
footsteps could be heard, these ones slower and heavier, as though trying to be
threatening.
Dorian
wasn’t surprised to see the man that made them. He had suspected all along that
Johnson Hayward had been the head of this particular establishment. In fact he
was pleased to have it finally confirmed. The smile he gave wasn’t welcomed.
“You think
you have achieved something by gaining access to this location, but you seem to
forget how we operate.”
“Why don’t
you enlighten me, Mr Hayward?”
He gave
Dorian a smirk. “You would like that, wouldn’t you? But not this time, this
time we are one step ahead.”
Johnson
Hayward clapped his hands and the lights went out, literally and metaphorically
as a hard hit to the head rendered Dorian unconscious.
When he
came to he was lying in the middle of a plaza – the same plaza that had been
wobbling in front of him earlier. This time it was real and full of life, the
sounds of people and cars and movement all around him. Someone came over and
spoke to him in Italian, offering a hand. He took it and stood up, taking a few
seconds to steady himself before thanking them and walking away.
He searched
for the alleyway but he couldn’t find it. Eventually he gave up and returned to
his hotel. Damn, he’d lost them, though this was the closest he had come in
five years. It wasn’t over yet.
This picture intrigued me...
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None of us want to have a night like this - although I wasn't sure what sort of night until the end. Great piece. Thanks for taking part.
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Interesting stories from both you and Lisa.
I liked your piece very much - crazy concept but very good, and the last lines about humanity especially. LOL Thanks for joining in.
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It's brilliant! I love it, I can relate to it even. So good. Thanks for joining.
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