I love the possibilities this object inspires. I seem to be in a bit of a sci-fi/alien phase at the moment and this picture just fed into that.
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Alien Objection
The report had said it
was a piece from a satellite in orbit and it was nothing to worry about,
although its lack of impact on the ground confused people. No one thought
anything of it; it became a landmark, a natural sculpture of sorts, and being
out in the tide line of the beach it didn’t bother anyone or get in the way. It
was referred to as ‘The Shell’ and it drew visitors and helped the economy of
the area.
Then the dead animals
started to be discovered, all within a hundred metre radius. From small
creatures like rabbits, hares, mice, to larger animals like badgers, foxes and
even a deer. There was speculation that it was ritualistic: someone practicing
the occult, but there was no defined lay out of the animals and no blood. The
autopsies revealed they had all suffered some kind of brain bleed, along with
ruptured ear drums.
People became a little
scared. And then it happened: The first human body was found.
It was my neighbour’s
son, little Jake. He was only 8 years old. He loved shells and stones, and
could be found most evenings after school down by the edge of the sea, poking
around in rock pools left behind by the high tide. His mum had made sure he had
all his swimming certificates before he was allowed to go there alone, even so
people still said he had drowned. But he hadn’t. He’d also had a brain bleed
brought on by burst ear drums. And his body hadn’t been anywhere near the water
when he was found.
It was enough to
unnerve a few people and houses started going up for sale as families began to move
away. And people stopped going to the beach. No one wanted to be near it. Except
me.
I wanted to know more.
I wanted to see it up close and touch it and try and understand if this thing
really did have anything to do with it. Was I worried? A little, but I was born
without ear drums so I didn’t consider myself at risk.
I went right up to it;
I touched its smooth black surface. I tapped it and felt it vibrate under my
fingers. The vibration went on a long time. I could feel it through my body and
the ground.
I wondered fleetingly
if it was a bomb – but if it was, surely it would have gone off by now? I
walked all round it. I even climbed inside.
It was open, with
coils that ran round like a spring. I could see everything outside: the sky, the
sea. But it looked different: the colours were too vivid and it was out of
focus, like I was looking at something projected. Then that vibration came
again, and I felt the structure move beneath me. Then the view outside changed;
I was no longer looking up at the sky, I was looking down at it, and around me was
the blackness of space and the stars.
But before I had a
chance to react, I was back on the ground, although a ground that I don’t recognize.
The sand has a strange purple hue and what looks like sea is a thick black syrupy
liquid. The sky is blue and I don’t have problems breathing, but I haven’t yet
dared to venture off the beach. I’m frightened what I’ll find there. Plus I
keep hanging out inside the shell in the hope that it will take me back. But
since my arrival it seems to be dormant, more like the sculpture it had became
viewed as originally. No amount of tapping elicits a vibration. I don’t know
what to do. I just want to go home.
Nice work, kiddo ;-) Here's my paltry effort - Sea Shell
ReplyDeleteI love it! Complete Brilliance - my sort of brilliance too. I was gripped. Thanks for entering.
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