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Doorway
He could see it, but had the others? As
they came to a halt along the pathway in the woods and observed the ‘green door’,
as Marjory referred to it, they thought it was just a pretty piece of artwork,
but Travis noticed something more. There were loose branches suspended in the
air around it. They could be set up with wires, but he didn’t believe this –
mostly because he could feel the power radiating from it.
He also found it curious that Steve had brought
them to a stop. Up until now, whenever he asked to stop they wouldn’t, as it
hadn’t been long enough since the last stop. They’d only been walking for 20
minutes; usually they walked for at least an hour before taking a break. Had
they sensed the power too, but weren’t conscious of it?
He considered mentioning it, but he was
considered the goofball of their group, a science geek who had a particular
interest in unknown phenomena that couldn’t be explained by human theories of
physics or chemistry. He believed humans had basic calculations wrong, but
despite years spent trying to prove it, no-one took him seriously.
This brought him back to the doorway. This
could be a piece of evidence. He walked up to the door.
Jackie called to him, “Where’re you going,
Travis? Aren’t you thirsty?”
He half-smiled as he glanced over his
shoulder at her; she was trying to stop him without realising why. The sixth-sense
of human intuition, maybe? Another thing science couldn’t provide evidence for.
“I’m just checking it out, Jackie, I’ll
come and get a drink in a minute.”
“Okay.”
He walked up to the door and scrutinised
the twigs and branches around it. They were rigid and unmoving, and when he
leaned in he could hear an electrical crackle. There was energy flowing through
them, attracting them like a magnet to the shape of the doorway. It was not a
built structure; it was formed by the collection of material drawn to it.
He stood in the opening and looked through.
The path continued, looking no different to what they had just walked through.
In fact, he turned round, it looked identical to the path they’d just taken,
except ... he turned round to look, yes it was a perfect mirror reflection, yet
their group wasn’t in it.
It might have been a trick of the eye if it
weren’t for the collection of birch trees off at the back right. They’d passed
an identical number on their left a few moments ago. And the placement of marks
on the bark were identical, and then the rest of the matching plants and trees became
apparent.
“What are you looking at?” Steve looked at
the path behind them and back at Travis, having noticed him looking back and
forth.
“I’m not sure about this doorway. I think
it’s more than just a piece of artwork. I think it’s some kind of mirror.”
It was the simplest way to explain it to
them, although it might not be accurate, but saying it was some kind of reflective
orb of power would only result in laughter. Plus, maybe it WAS a mirror. Was it
solid? He reached out his hand, taking his time, feeling the throb of power in
his fingers as they moved closer. They went past the edge of the doorway, and
kept on going until his entire hand was through, there was no resistance at
all.
But then a strange thing occurred: He saw his
fingers wobble, almost shimmer, and when he tried to pull his hand back it
wouldn’t move. He was pulling from the shoulder, but there was no give. His
hand was trapped.
The others had been watching him, and Steve
jumped up. “What’s going on?”
“I don’t know.” Travis tried to keep his
voice calm, but panic was rising. “I can’t get my hand back, it won’t budge.”
Steve joined him and took hold of his arm,
pulling on it, but it still wouldn’t move.
Then Travis felt a yank on the other side
and his entire arm went through. “Help me!” he cried.
Steve grabbed Travis by the waist, pulling
him back as hard as he could. For a moment there was a sort of tug of war, but
then they both fell back as Travis was released. They lay there for a moment, relieved,
but it was short lived as the girls started screaming and he realised his hand
was missing.
Oh a very mysterious story. What the hell is on the other side of that mirror/portal?
ReplyDeleteAnd that right there is the intrigue. 😉
DeleteYou have to find a prompt to follow up and tell us now!
DeleteHere’s my attempt at this weeks prompt; The Advent of the Clairsentient I hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteI loved it, such energy and peace too
DeleteA tale that could lead into an epic novel.
DeleteSeeing as though I never got where I was going this week, for sure!
DeleteIt stood there quietly, how long it had been there, no one knew. No one took any notice of the doorway at the end of the field next to the woods, but I did, though I never dare walk through it. The doorway stayed the same as I grew up, each week I would visit and dream about what lay on the other side. Yet I dare not go beyond. Now I'm older and more intrigued than ever, I'd not been for a few years and hesitated as I enter the field, I did wonder if it was still there, waiting. I am a lost soul these days and no one noticed me. There it was, still waiting, still standing. Taking a deep breath I launched myself forward a few timid steps at a time, taking one last look at the world I'd grown up in, I turn away and wish with all my might, "Take me home, wherever that is." Smiling I allow my fingers to trace the open door way before stepping forward into the unknown.
ReplyDeleteTwitter username is - Nadkim. Title is - Into the unknown.
Ooo I hope she gets her wish. Thanks for joining.
DeleteLove it Nadine!
DeleteI only got three stories in last year, so I want to do better this year!
ReplyDeleteA Doorway to Nowhere
Intriguing. Thank you for joining.
DeleteYikes! I nearly forgot to post a comment here! Here is my humble attempt: Nixie's Brothel
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great prompt, Miranda!
Really enjoyed that intriguing take on the prompt. A larger story could be unearthed out of that.
DeleteWhatever it is in me that's writing the words, it seems to have a lot of words to write.
ReplyDeleteInside My Eyelids (8)
Very different perspective. Interesting take.
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