This one was one of my favourite sorts of stories. I always have to go there when I see this kind of prompt.
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Reflected Reality
He didn’t feel right when he came off the
plane, and it only got worse when he reached the check-in desk at the hotel. They
couldn’t find the name he gave, Randy Mertland, but they could find someone
called Ross Mortel who had the same credit card details.
He pulled out his drivers’ license but they
still called the police. It got even weirder when the cops looked up Ross
Mortel’s drivers’ licence and it was the same photo. But they decided there had
to be an error somewhere so they let him check in and use his credit card. He
wondered if someone had attempted to steal his ID.
He tried to relax and follow the itinerary
he had planned but he was confused when the second museum gave dates for things
that just couldn’t be possible. He’d thought it was just him the first time –
ancient Egypt wasn’t his forte after all, but he knew his recent wars, and
there was no way the First World War had started in November of 1914, it had
definitely been July. Most of the other details were right, but not those
dates. He didn’t get it.
Then the final rabbit hole grew bigger when
he arrived at Trafalgar square.
Randy was sure he would have heard about a
replica of the Paris Louvre museum being built here, after all he lived in
Paris, plus he’d only been to London six months ago. The glass domes reflected
the cloudy sky around. He was so fascinated he bought a ticket and went in.
The literature about the museum said it had
been there for over twenty years. It was insane. Many of the exhibits were the
same as the Paris ones, but there was always something slightly off: a name
spelled differently, dates not right, or wrong location. What was going on?
When he came out it was raining hard and
had been for some time. He wondered if it was just him. Maybe there was something
wrong with him; maybe someone had slipped something into his drink when he’d
slept on the plane. He really didn’t know.
As he stood at the traffic lights waiting
for the lights to turn, he stared at his reflection in a gutter puddle
wondering, until he realised the sky was clear in the reflection. Huh? He
looked up, it was still raining. How could that be? The buildings in the puddle
were different too. What was going on?
He squatted down to take a closer look,
ignoring the light change. No one took any notice of him as they moved past,
and then someone bumped him.
He put out a hand to stop himself falling but
it went straight through the puddle, and he fell, tumbling through, until he hit
something hard and blacked out.
When Randy came round he was lying on the
pavement, and someone was crouched over him asking him if he was okay. He felt
a bump on his head but otherwise he was fine. But it was sunny here, the sky
was blue and the buildings around him weren’t the same as the ones before he’d
fallen.
He got up and thanked the person for their
help. He knew where he was; he was just on a different street. He walked back
and turned the corner into Trafalgar square.
His sudden stop caused the people behind
him to tut and sigh as they passed.
The Lourve replica was gone. The lions were
there, Nelson’s column, the fountains, but no glass pyramid, no long queue of
people waiting to go into the underground museum.
This was crazy – or was it? Was he back in
his reality? Had he had some kind of delusion or dream? He didn’t want to entertain
the wacko idea that he had slipped through time some how.
To be sure, he went back to the museums and
found all the dates were as they should be. And when he returned to the hotel,
the receptionist at the desk gave him a strange look when he asked if all was
fine with the mix up with his name.
‘I’m sorry, Sir, you must have spoken to
someone else, I don’t know anything about that.’
It has been a while but it can never be too long ago and it sometimes hits me when I hear a plane overhead and look up and it seems lower than it is supposed to be and I feel a panic that it will happen again and I remember the smoke and the smell and the hordes walking dazed in midtown and the funerals and the sadness when I see a movie like “When Harry Met Sally” and they are there where they no longer are and I know I did not suffer like so many people suffered although I often ate by the fountain where the globe was crushed but it still hits me and I remember taking a picture on Hudson Street looking downtown where they used to be and a stranger coming up to me and saying how sad it all was and feeling as I often do part of a community that suffered and has survived but which feels those minutes again every once in a while when a plane seems to fly lower over the city that it is supposed to and then it is gone and the queasiness passes and I get on with my life.
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Nice job, Terry!
DeleteWell done, Miranda. This an intriguing and quite frightening take on the amazing prompt this week.
DeleteHey Terry I was waiting to take a breath there as you didn't put in any punctuation. Thanks for sharing your account of the day. I also remember it.
DeleteHere's my offering for this week :) Doorways
ReplyDeleteWhat a cliff hanger! Love it.
DeleteHere's mine. I enjoyed that!
ReplyDeleteLast
Poignant.
DeleteLooks like the dreams are continuing, doesn't it.
ReplyDeleteInside My Eyelids (9)
This was dreamy indeed!
DeleteHere’s my attempt at this weeks prompt; Message in a Puddle hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteLove how you encompassed all the details of the prompt in there.
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