I think the piece doesn't just speak of Gaza but of all war and the general state of our world - particularly at the moment, and the emotion of it. And although I was unsure about whether to use this picture, I feel that it offers a lot of inspiration for writing.
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Survival
It was
dead, it was decayed, and he could no longer do anything about it. Murphy
retreated, he couldn’t stay out here; he had to find a safe place, as much
within as without.
He found an
opening in the rubble, an old doorway that led down into a cellar. He set up
home there thankful for his survival pack, bringing out a windup light and a
bed roll, and chewing on an old dried fruit snack. It was a good find.
After placing
a few strategic pieces of debris across the opening, he was sure he could ride
it out down here. A couple of good scavenges of some abandoned homes had rewarded
him with enough to stay holed up.
He lay in
the dark in his cellar, only using his light when necessary. He imagined the
world above, the shit show that was going on. The killing, the death, the
ravage of war – well they called it war, but it really it was annihilation.
They’d come
in their droves out of the sky, with weapons that had never been imagined, let
alone seen. And what had baffled everyone is that they’d been human – the same
species. You couldn’t spot them once they were on the ground; they could be
anyone. Murphy wondered how they knew who were them and who were us – but they
did know, they seemed to know exactly.
There’d
been no negotiation, just action, and they’d known about all the secret bunkers
in all the countries. There was no place left unturned – in fact they’d gone
after the politicians and leaders first, coupled with the religious factions.
That was why Murphy had lasted so long; he’d been a part of neither at any
point in his life and had no intention of being. He’d kept his head down and
done his time in the service, learning all he could about survival. Some would
say he’d gone AWOL now, but there was no such thing anymore, the military had
fallen. When you couldn’t tell who the enemy was, you ended up recruiting them
into your ranks. Then they’d taken it part from within.
It had been
a detailed and specific attack. Murphy was sure they’d been observing them for
a long time, they knew everything, and they’d known how to destabilise.
Murphy’s plan was to wait it out. They were almost at the end; there were few
native humans left, and they weren’t planning on staying once they’d achieved
their aim.
Murphy heard
a shuffling sound. He sprang to his feet ascertaining that it came from the
opening. He had his knife at the ready as he moved to the wall closest to the
steps. Was it animal or human? He heard footsteps: human.
He could
see them in his mind’s eye coming down the steps, then he heard a click and the
cellar was flooded with light. He blinked rapidly but couldn’t get his vision
to adjust before he was on the floor facedown with someone on top of him. It
was one of them.
He heard
the crackle of a walkie talkie, and the words ‘got him’ whispered into it. He
was surprised; they normally executed people, they didn’t waste time capturing
them. Another person came into the cellar and together they manhandled him back
to the surface. His eyes adjusted enough for him to see the open transport
truck waiting for him. They cuffed him into the back and two more sat either
side of him.
No one
spoke as the van moved out through the shattered war zone, and Murphy watched
the debris reduce and turn into open swathes of land. Eventually a town came
into sight, one that was still intact, and the truck pulled up in front of a
large municipal building.
Two men in
white coats were waiting at the entrance.
“Oh good,
you’ve found him. Let’s get him inside.” The one on the left stepped forward.
“How you doing, Murphy? Unfortunately you’re going to have to spend some time
in the quiet room. We can’t risk you escaping again.”
“We found
him in a cellar on the old housing estate they took down last week,” said one
of his captors as they handed him over. “By the look of it he’d managed to
equip himself with a few things along the way.”
“He was a
top ranking marine; he knows how to survive,” the one on the right said. “It’s
just awful what shellshock can do to a person. You’re safe here with us now,
Murphy.”
Just enough words to get the idea on paper. No more than that. It's a bare framework. And I'm worn out by the SARS-CoV-2 thing. Here.
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Gosh as you say, a great outline, and it works well with the current world status.
DeleteI like this one a lot, Miranda. It's got a powerfully strong image of what the wars really are and great ending that leaves you wondering what's going to happen to Murphy. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteWell, I was waiting for this weeks prompt and decided to look back. Here's my go at this image for you. Raphael's Earthquake Hope you enjoy it.
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