This turned out milder than I thought. I seem to have lost my dark streak at the moment. I want to change that. We will see what next week brings.
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Visitors
Can
it see us? Adrienne moved to her left to see better
round the foliage.
I
don’t think it can. Ralph moved towards the
creature but there was no reaction until the bushes were disturbed. The
creature paused, looking in his direction, but then returned to what it was
doing. I think it can hear though.
How can
it hear?
Those
fleshy flaps covering holes on either side of their heads, they call them
‘ears’.
Ralph and Adrienne watched the creature,
wondering what it was doing; it kept bending and putting things in a gathering
pouch and occasionally in an opening in its head.
This was the first time anyone had been on
the ground. They had done simulations and learnt as much as possible but there
was something totally awe inspiring actually being here, and standing inches
away from a real creature.
Observations had been ongoing for some time
but there’d been no physical interaction attempted as they were considered
highly dangerous, their volatile nature having been recorded many times.
A high shriek cut the air.
Ralph
what is that? He could feel Adrienne wince.
I don’t
know.
Another creature appeared, smaller than the
other, balancing on four poles rather than two. It emitted a keening sound from
its opening, revealing white barbs inside.
Does
it see us?
I
think it does.
It kept moving towards them and then back.
Then they heard another sound, it was low and drawn out and seemed to emit from
the other creatures mouth.
“What is it boy? You sense something too?
Yeah, I thought I saw something earlier.”
The creature moved toward them to where the
smaller one was still making a strange sound. It touched the smaller creature
and the sound reduced, although it still emitted a high pitch that Ralph and
Adrienne struggled to tolerate.
Did
you record that?
Yes,
I got it. Adrienne replied.
Excellent.
We can analyse it back at the lab. Come on, I want to get away from that noise.
Me too.
As they retreated the sound stopped, both
creatures appearing to sense their absence, and retreating themselves. Ralph
and Adrienne were excited; they had a lot to impart to their collective.
Love this - it reminds me of all the 'Humans are weird" & "Earth is space Australia" stories.
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DeleteVery interesting tale this week Miranda. Kept me engaged and smiling until the end.
ReplyDeleteHere is my take on the spooky picture. presenting Living Glass hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story, what an ending! Loved it.
DeleteGlad you liked it.
DeleteJust like a bad penny, I have, once more, turned up. :)
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More like a bright shiny penny! I enjoyed this, made me wonder. Thanks for coming back!
DeleteHi Miranda, loved the picture. Definitely screamed for another timetravel story! Here it is: Out Of Sync
ReplyDeleteI like this, the ending works too. Thanks for joining.
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