It seems that through my entries at the moment, I am channelling a character that insists on being heard, this might well be her beginning.
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Snubbed
It was not on that they had ignored her.
She didn’t care that it was their day or their wedding, she was the important
one; she should be there. People might not want to recognise that she was the
controlling power, they might want to pretend that it was that stupid muppet
they’d put a crown on, but she was the force behind him. She was the Crimson
Queen and he was a pathetic imitation.
But no invitation had turned up; she had
been snubbed. That wouldn’t do. She’d have to show them she wasn’t someone to
be trifled with. She’d show them what real power was in this pathetic place
they called a kingdom. They might have scraped it together from the rubble of
the destroyed world and taken pride in that, but it could have been so much
more. They’d settled for following the old traditions, some of which had even
been the cause of the downfall in the first place. They didn’t learn. It’s like
they didn’t want to.
If their half-arsed King would only let her
take control and let her lead, but although he spouted about it no longer being
a patriarch and women being equal, it was crap! He held her down and held her
back wanting to be the figure head, claiming he was making it easy on her. Ha! She’d
show him. She’d show all of them!
Brianna stalked out of her bedchamber. She
knew where they were getting married; the old stately home had the only rooms
still worthy of such a special occasion.
She stomped into the room she used as her
wardrobe and started sifting through her dresses. Where was it? She knew it was
here somewhere. She looked up at a shelf and saw a gold brocaded piece of
material sticking out of a box. Ah, there it was!
She got it down and shook the voluminous
dress out. It had been a rich discovery when they had taken this mansion over,
as had several of her dresses. It was perfect for crashing the party. They
would rue the day they had acted so wilfully.
She let out a laugh that came close to a
cackle and went about readying herself.
***
Brianna had turned her hand at many tricks
in her time; it’s how she’d won her place. And she wasn’t going to scrimp
tonight, not when she was looking so fabulous.
So when a flash preceded her arrival in the
main ballroom among the billowing smoke, the satisfying gasps and screams
helped her continue the illusion she held powers no one else had.
When the smoke cleared, she stood majestic,
giving them all a chance to be clear who had arrived. She spotted the bride and
groom near the front of the cowering crowd.
“Ah, my dears, I believe congratulations
are in order, even though you failed to seek them from me personally.” She eyed
them harshly.
The groom stepped forward and bowed. “I’m
sorry ma’am, we didn’t think our little wedding would be of interest to you.”
“Nonsense, all weddings are of interest. We
need to see who will be producing our future, if in fact you can produce.”
The bride joined her new husband. “Oh yes,
ma’am, we have been tested, we are fertile and should be able to produce quite
quickly.”
“Good, because for your penance I will
require your first-born daughter.”
There were gasps among the crowd and the
bride burst into tears.
“Now, now, not so hysterical, it is only
one of multiple you will be having. I’m sure you can spare me just one. And you
can have possession of her until her fifth birthday, so you can prepare her. Be
thankful, she will have a very special life with me. I will teach her all I
know and raise her in my image.”
The bride attempted to stifle her tears
with the consoling arms of the groom around her, but she still looked at their
queen with contempt in her eyes when she said, “Thank you ma’am.”
“Good. Then the matter is cleared up and I
won’t sully your day further.” There was another flash and plume of smoke and
she was gone, only her laughter echoing round the room.
She did love putting on a show and the plan
was coming together. She had five years to prepare – give or take. It was going
to be glorious.
That is a very good story, Miranda. I would love to know what Brianna is going to do over her 5 years. Well done.
ReplyDeleteCan't decide if she is the crone Tricky or whether Tricky is her daughter!! ooo, I'll have fun finding out.
DeleteHere is my story for this picture presenting. A Storm's Waltz Hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteLove this, you brought the picture to life!
DeleteThank you.
DeleteI'm not supposed to understand the side of me that writes, am I.
ReplyDeletePerspective
Why not? It reflects what you see and feel, much like your story. Good to have you hear again Mark.
DeleteWow. Great story Miranda. I do hope it's not as easy for Brianna as she hoped!!!
ReplyDeleteEvil people always find things easy ... Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteHi Miranda, here's my story. Combined with a prompt from another site, hope that's ok! Tried something a little bit different this week! Illusions In The Sky
ReplyDeleteI don't mind at all, the more prompts the more intriguing. And a wonderful tale too.
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