I only had an opening line for this tale and it ended up somewhere completely different, in a style and about a type of character I had never written before. I am not sure about it, but I like it enough to post.
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Choices
He screamed at the sky
in frustration, ‘Noooo!’
It couldn’t end here,
he had come too far. He looked along the shoreline in both directions but this
had been the only place to cross, the remains of the partially submerged bridge
visible.
He paced back and
forth for a while, channeling the great bear energy, then let it go. It was
useless to him now in this moment. He needed to rest and think.
Wahkan squatted down
and folded his arms over his knees. He needed to get across the great lake to
those mountains and he needed to do it before the sun had left the sky. He had
been sent by the-one-that-knew, and he had to replace the slayer that had gone
before him, who had been slain himself. It was up to Wahkan to right the
balance. It was the only way that peace would return to his tribe.
He personally hated
the eye-for-an-eye ideology, but the white man had brought it with him over the
plains, and it had swept like wildfire among the tribesmen. They considered it
the only way forward. But it was the way forward to madness and mayhem and the
end of their people.
Despite knowing this,
Wahkan had to follow the instructions of the chief – or did he?
He stood up stretching
his legs. What would happen if he didn’t complete this journey? In some ways
the journey had already been completed when the slayer had been reported dead.
It meant his tribe had not won this part of the battle. But they weren’t
satisfied with that, they wished a repeat.
Wahkan had no idea
what or who he would face. He could easily be slain. At this moment he still
had a choice.
Was this destroyed
bridge a message from spirit? Was he not meant to reach the goal? Was he meant
to stop and contemplate whether to go on? Was this a sign that he must turn
around?
He was not a great
reader of signs from spirit; they had to be blatant to get through, and there
wasn’t much more blatant than this. He thanked spirit, and felt the knot that
had been in his stomach for the last few days loosen.
But if he turned
around where would he go? He couldn’t return to his tribe. He would be punished
or worse.
Yet another choice to
make; spirit clearly wanted him to show strength of mind instead of body in
this matter. He had heard of other tribes far down south who held fast to
tradition and refused to be drawn into the fight. He would head that way.
The new decision and
intention sparked his enthusiasm. He felt relief and a sense of excitement.
With a journey of discovery ahead rather than death, his energy was renewed.
But despite his busy mind making plans, he took a moment to pause and admire
the nature around him, thanking spirit for the moment of clarity and humility.
I'm here, at last!
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What a brilliant tale, I love it. Thanks for joining!
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ReplyDeleteWonderful to have you back, despite the topic of your beautifully written tale.
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Interesting prompt!
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Have a great weekend!
Great piece, and well done in making it fit so many prompts. Thanks for joining Mid-Week flash!
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